Cooool!!
Very cool!
Perfect graphics! Excellent smoke effects! Amazing perspective tricks! Awesome lighting!
To improve: The rythm was a bit in the slow side.
Keep up the awesome work! Ever tried to make a longer story?
Cooool!!
Very cool!
Perfect graphics! Excellent smoke effects! Amazing perspective tricks! Awesome lighting!
To improve: The rythm was a bit in the slow side.
Keep up the awesome work! Ever tried to make a longer story?
Well...
Stylish graphics and good animation, but no story at all. Keep working on your storytelling.
It gave me the shivers
I'ts the first time I get goosebumps for watching something in Newgrounds. I don't know if it's scarier than sadder or the other way around. Perfect storytelling.
To improve: the character of Mr. Creazil felt too "flash" to me.
Very cool!
Great storyboarding, really cool graphics and really funny. I only think the rhythm can be improved: some cuts linger too much and some movements can be faster.
thnx for that tip - will definately consider that for future films! tnx for the response
Master!
This guy is a real animation craftsman. A pro. Watch and learn, everybody!
Dull
This movie is boring, derivative and unimaginative. Was I supposed to know who the guy in the photo is? Try something else, please!
Great composition skills
You can animate. You can compose beautiful frames. The story looks interesting too. You have drawing skills, but you need to work more on them. Keep them coming!
Good work!
I liked the characters and loved the animation techinque. I would change the typeface, it doesnt' belong into the style. Keep working in your storytelling and you'll be a great animator.
Much effort, not too interesting
I would likie it more if you had put some meaning into it.
Yeah, ive been working on a new one with a storyline and all that good stuff.
-Kraftick
Greetings earthlings!
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Animator, cartoonist
Mexico
Joined on 6/17/05