Fun but predictable
Why like a 90% of the jokes end in some pointless violent act? Predicatability takes the fun out of it, you know...
Fun but predictable
Why like a 90% of the jokes end in some pointless violent act? Predicatability takes the fun out of it, you know...
Well...
I liked the charcter and the style. But the pace is boooring and the jokes aren't really funny.
Amazing animation
Your animations are always amazing, and this one excells.
I hate to say that the story was more interesting in previous chapters of the series.
A top animation, anyway!
no it's ok to say it.. as I mentioned in my author comments, this movie is a 3min action sequence that I created especially for the music. The story (albeit a very thin one) is that Bitey is chased by the YuYu and neutralises their threat in his own Bitey way, i.e. charging at it head-on.
Funny
But work more the pace. The sound quality needs work, too.
Simple end good!
It's funny, cute, violent, and touching. And I loved the music mix.
¡Great!
Nice
I liked the art and the metaphors. Very heartfelt and somewhat poetic.
I think you need to improve the animation (read about the 12 principles of animation)
Something really original!
I liked the rythym and the pacing. The characters are something!
Very good!
Cute and thrilling!
Great job! I bet this idea could become a good animated TV series. I'd watch it!
To improve: the graphics are cool, but they lack a notch to be PRO! Keep practising. And some sound FX would be great!
BTW: The song is not other than "La Bamba", a Mexican folk song, popularized in the USA by Ritchie Valens, and some time later by Los Lobos in the homonimous movie. The japanese interpretation you choose is unknown to me, but it sure adds kitsch to your animation.
Congratulations!
Greetings earthlings!
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Mexico
Joined on 6/17/05