The song saved you!
Excellent:
-Cinematic storytelling
-Choice of song
To improve:
-Lip Sync (have you streamed your audio?)
-Animation
Sucked:
-Drawings. Keep practicing
The song saved you!
Excellent:
-Cinematic storytelling
-Choice of song
To improve:
-Lip Sync (have you streamed your audio?)
-Animation
Sucked:
-Drawings. Keep practicing
there must be something i've done in the audio streaming techniques i've used, because there's many different comments on the lip-sync. and yes, i'm not really an artist, but i'm trying to improve on my drawings.
see you next time =)
Very cool!
Great storyboarding, really cool graphics and really funny. I only think the rhythm can be improved: some cuts linger too much and some movements can be faster.
thnx for that tip - will definately consider that for future films! tnx for the response
Much effort, not too interesting
I would likie it more if you had put some meaning into it.
Yeah, ive been working on a new one with a storyline and all that good stuff.
-Kraftick
Greetings earthlings!
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Animator, cartoonist
Mexico
Joined on 6/17/05